your own lyrics

[livi]

literally just made this up:

goodnight lullaby
goodnight stars
won't see you in the morning
farewell from my heart

farewell stories
farewell songs
goodnight fairies
on my lawn
i'll see you
the other side of dawn

we're taking back the night
cos the stars should be all ours

when i close my
starstricken eyes
i think about morning
and awoken eyes
i think about my own
tearfilled eyes

i think about the one who'll
steal my heart
i think about the one who'll
name my stars
i think about the one i've
left behind

it's you

[jimi]

hee hee/ya she is pretty.and good lyrics livi.i really am finding it hard to actually write stuff thses day.i mean back in summer i was writing them every day and thats when i wrote things like decromat

[the drummer]

i think ur a feckin puff

[owensrevenge]

Don't force yourself to wright.

[ais]

ah thanks livi ... i havent seen ya but im gonna say u are too

[Semen]

Flinch

Another moment gone
With another chance lost
Sure to see some action soon
With or without here or not
So rise up to the challenge
Come face it here and now
Don't let this be the conflict
Empty words said in a row

Cos everytime i see you
I back down and away
And everytime you say it
I stand no words to say
But this time it's different
I won't move an inch
Come do what you will
But you won't see me flinch

Eyes stare and fires burn
Blood boils as this grows tense
Another confrentation
And still we've found no sense
It's like a mirror image
No movement on either side
Transfixed to this one spot
As hatred fuels in eyes

So raise your hand all you want
For i will see it matched
So drop it like a hammer
Pray God a lucky catch

[carol]

ah that's great Simon.. *hugs for you*

[jim]

cool.words to flinch,i was wondering what they'd be like.thumbs up semen

[emmzy]

wicked song babes! im likin it i totally get a feeling of anger from that rather intense.
i was looking through this thread and i noticed people clal james' song random and rather thrown together but i actually like that tis like.. your reading his flow of thought which i rather like myself. of course i love all the other songs too but i do rather like his jumbled up style too. *thumbs up* for jammy

[jimi]

thanks em,ummm over the last two days especially,there has been a lot of reference to emo,so here's my kind of take on things,inspired truthfully by the one and only brian scally,so it cant be all bad

Idiosa
Stand tall,be proud,
when asked ur name scream it out loud for you are the voice,you are the freedom
It's just a word nothing more,
tears us apart not like before,for we are the flag we are the depression

Nothing makes a fool,but the fool himself,
nothing makes a hero but the hero's flock
lets be millionaires for an hour or so,just let it all flow away

So this is how i must be classed,must pull this stick from my ass,
for i am the music,i am the chords
i'll invest in a little technology,
for a chance to make myself better than he but i look like an idiot as you hand from the wall

Chorus

Oh god stop,for a just a minute or so,
just so we can see,just so we'll know,
its not so bad,if even at all,
we've done our job and made our call,
f**k ME I AM EMO,f**k ME I AM EMO,
f**k ME I AM MASTERFUL,f**k ME IM AN EMO

Ur right,it may be a bit muddled but i'd still like feedback on them if thats not too much trouble and if it is,put down what ur f**kin doing and give me some feedback

[jimi]

and i dont want the last two days effect ur opinion,if u hate em fine,but if you like em be honest,but if you dont,dont say you do.thankyou
jimmy moore

[livi]

well you're asking for criticism and i must say they're good, but being the good clean girl i am, a lot of cursing in a song generally puts me off a good bit and to be honest i don't like the "f**k me i'm emo" bit.. cos you're not..

[susie]

i think they're cool. i agree with livi about cursing but iy isnt a major factor affecting my opinion. any harmonies yet?

[jimi]

not yet caz the tune hasnt been written.i know the swearing isnt needed but i kind of do it to try and get a bit of emphasis and i write what im feeling

[susie]

cool. no harm in trying. call me later

[jimi]

ok not a prob my dear

[livi]

polar bears

shut out the cold wind freezing the air
shut out the cold rain sparkling hair
cold frost glitters on cars and the ground
halation makes moon circles, rainbows so round

maybe it's an arabian night
or maybe it's just my turkish delight
but solar glares hurt polar bears

hotter embers warm the grate
i remember colder, something yet more great
distant memories of a distant past
something to hold on to, something to last

maybe it's an arabian night
or maybe it's just my turkish delight
but solar glares hurt polar bears

[brianthepirate]

f**k is an english word. and emo is everybody. nice one.

[kingisabella]

jimi said:

thanks em,ummm over the last two days especially,there has been a lot of reference to emo,so here's my kind of take on things,inspired truthfully by the one and only brian scally,so it cant be all bad

Idiosa
Stand tall,be proud,
when asked ur name scream it out loud for you are the voice,you are the freedom
It's just a word nothing more,
tears us apart not like before,for we are the flag we are the depression

Nothing makes a fool,but the fool himself,
nothing makes a hero but the hero's flock
lets be millionaires for an hour or so,just let it all flow away

So this is how i must be classed,must pull this stick from my ass,
for i am the music,i am the chords
i'll invest in a little technology,
for a chance to make myself better than he but i look like an idiot as you hand from the wall

Chorus

Oh god stop,for a just a minute or so,
just so we can see,just so we'll know,
its not so bad,if even at all,
we've done our job and made our call,
f**k ME I AM EMO,f**k ME I AM EMO,
f**k ME I AM MASTERFUL,f**k ME IM AN EMO

Ur right,it may be a bit muddled but i'd still like feedback on them if thats not too much trouble and if it is,put down what ur f**kin doing and give me some feedback

im not insulting you no matter how much it may seem like it......the song is cool. cant say its not... but the whole "f**k me im an emo "....is all very.........."i want to die, my life is sh*t".........i think you could write something much better in its place. im guessing you wrote that yesterday coz it is very emo.....and even if you dont like the word you cant say its not....unless your being sarcastic.

[kingisabella]

"i don't like the "f**k me i'm emo" bit.. cos you're not.."...to be fair, we're pretty much an emo band...all our songs are emo, includng the ones if writeen.

[livi]

mmm... i'd disagree with you on that. i've only heard a couple of your songs but they're not in emo style and the lyrics aren't that emo.. lord, i've said that word too much today.

[kingisabella]

lol.fair enough, but there all about girls and the majority are influenced and relation to girls and somebodies interets in movnig to quickly into things. eh/ EH?

[jimi]

actually thats not all true mr.forde-not adapting violent tone.monster man is about superheroes and the difference between good and evil,decromat is about fmaily issues and how money wont save a dying family.turn,ok thats probably our most emo but again thats not about love its actually supposed to be in the eyes of a servant who hates his king.im glad,probably is but i know you like that song,and to settle it,the f**k ME IM EMO thing was in fact a sarcastic remark.it basically means,it doesnt matter if im emo,treat me the same as you usually would.its not a remark that i myself am emo,its just a statement

[owensrevenge]

cut out the f**k me i'm emo part. it's way too pretensious. the rest of the song is good though. but the f**k me i'm emo part is .... it just doesn't belong. but i liked the rest of the song.

[susie]

yup all our relationships with girls. : )

livi, those were unreal. well done