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Post by livi on Dec 7, 2005 22:21:03 GMT
thank you! you were the only one who read them cos everyone else was continuing their emo argument..
have another one that i wrote last night, doesn't have a tune yet though:
hit me again
it's taken me a long time to realise they're not out to get me and they're not all spies people are bad and people are good that's something that's seldom understood
hit me again, hit me again hit me again cos i can take it hit me again come on and hit me again hit me again cos you won't break it
it took me a while to stand up and shout but that's what the business is all about you can hear me through your walls through the ceiling and down the hall
hit me again, hit me again hit me again cos i can take it hit me again come on and hit me again hit me again cos you won't break it
stand straight and tall like pillars of rome stand straight and tall like statues unknown
hit me again, hit me again hit me again cos i can take it hit me again come on and hit me again hit me again cos you won't break it
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Post by susie on Dec 7, 2005 22:23:09 GMT
livi flynn does britney. pretty good. distortion would be savage with that
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Post by owensrevenge on Dec 7, 2005 22:33:25 GMT
thats class. very feel good.
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Post by jimi on Dec 8, 2005 16:40:15 GMT
savage eh?ya it is class,real kind of dont give a sh*t kind of song,really good lyrics
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Post by susie on Dec 8, 2005 22:29:33 GMT
savage cabbage james
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Post by livi on Dec 8, 2005 23:04:06 GMT
JOB! SAVAGE! SEXUAL!!
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Post by susie on Dec 9, 2005 16:21:43 GMT
LOL!!! dacent tune.....
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Post by jimi on Dec 9, 2005 18:03:48 GMT
oh ya boi,wheres me ol doll?
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Post by susie on Dec 9, 2005 18:34:06 GMT
she's over der wit herr fella
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Post by emmzy on Dec 10, 2005 12:39:34 GMT
HAHA!!! maniacs maaaannnnnn.... feckin maaaniaaacs loik...
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Post by susie on Dec 11, 2005 17:48:11 GMT
look at de state of her
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Post by livi on Dec 11, 2005 18:47:57 GMT
ahem... so back to me now...
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Post by susie on Dec 11, 2005 20:13:34 GMT
i was talking about you.
burn!!!!!!
messin liv
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Post by livi on Dec 11, 2005 20:20:41 GMT
shocked and apalled.
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Post by susie on Dec 11, 2005 20:22:51 GMT
oh go write about it. : )
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Post by mavis on Dec 17, 2005 22:16:23 GMT
K-james sent me these over msn just now. And i told him 2 go post em straight away. But hes 2 lazy!!! Lol-just kidn james. Hugs! So voila-from the one and only james mooring! Lol STATE OF SHOCKI cross the threshold for what seems like the hundreth time, All i ask is that you bear me in mind, For whats ahead, And what you will encounter, Cant take the smile from my face When i see you behind the counter, I look at this familiar,happy go lucky image, But thats not me standing as your right hand man Chorus This state of shock makes me feel so much betterYou are tonight and tonight i sleep soundly, Sleeping soundly all the while As i walk this highway that scares me sh*tless, Locked in yet another fistfight Where i pretend im weightless for survival, For i am the cloud ChorusSmile, just smile and the whole world thinks you're an idiot, I pivet sideways, to make you feel like you're staring straight up, Be quiet for a second and listen to your own stupidity Chorus This state of shock makes me feel like heaven
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Post by brianthepirate on Dec 17, 2005 22:39:46 GMT
that fricking rocks. a whole fricking lot!
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Post by brianthepirate on Dec 17, 2005 23:51:07 GMT
here we go,
I AM NOt
It all comes down to, the point you want to make, when you tell me to listen up or get the f**k out of your, pretty messed up life, id try harder, if i knew the words to say what ive always tried to say, all those f**king times and,
im probably better off, cause i know that two plus two makes five and thats all that matters, all that matters, all that shatters, when i say that im probably better off, dead than trying to be someone im not, trying to slide out from what holds me down in-
Chorus: Disaster and thunder, keeps me under, i cant try, to fix it, and this, fright in staging, keeps me raging, to come out from under, the person that, i am not.
it all comes down to, the sh*t i have to take, when i say that ive had enough, and try to be who i am, not a messed up case, just cant find the words to explain, what ive always tried to explain,
and im probably better off, cause i know that you plus you is danger, only danger, only sh*t that hits the fan, and that im probably better off alone, alone, alone with you, cause you and me are far from the part where the clock strikes 12 and cinderella goes...
Chorus: Disaster and thunder, keeps me under, i cant try, to fix it, and this, fright in staging, keeps me raging, to come out from under, the person that, i am not.
i am not, what you thought i was, wish i could be, but that wont happen and, i am not, what i thought i could be, what i thought i might be, was every little f**king thing that i am not. and how? i could feel this way... i dont know why? i dont chose my days... i cant say how? i could think what was what i might be, anything i could be, me against the plot, anything i could be is every little thing that i am not.
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Post by brianthepirate on Dec 17, 2005 23:52:52 GMT
here we go,
I AM NOt
It all comes down to, the point you want to make, when you tell me to listen up or get the f**k out of your, pretty messed up life, id try harder, if i knew the words to say what ive always tried to say, all those f**king times and,
im probably better off, cause i know that two plus two makes five and thats all that matters, all that matters, all that shatters, when i say that im probably better off, dead than trying to be someone im not, trying to slide out from what holds me down in-
Chorus: Disaster and thunder, keeps me under, i cant try, to fix it, and this, fright in staging, keeps me raging, to come out from under, the person that, i am not.
it all comes down to, the sh*t i have to take, when i say that ive had enough, and try to be who i am, not a messed up case, just cant find the words to explain, what ive always tried to explain,
and im probably better off, cause i know that you plus you is danger, only danger, only sh*t that hits the fan, and that im probably better off alone, alone, alone with me, cause you and me are far from the part where the clock strikes 12 and cinderella goes through...
Chorus: Disaster and thunder, keeps me under, i cant try, to fix it, and this, fright in staging, keeps me raging, to come out from under, the person that, i am not.
i am not, what you thought i was, wish i could be, but that wont happen and, i am not, what i thought i could be, what i thought i might be, was every little f**king thing that i am not. and how? i could feel this way... i dont know why? i dont chose my days... i cant say how? i could think what was what i might be, anything i could be, me against the plot, anything i could be is every little thing that i am not.
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Post by brianthepirate on Dec 17, 2005 23:53:30 GMT
AH FECK! i tried to edit the f**king thing and i post it fricking twice! its been a bad day
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Post by livi on Dec 18, 2005 10:29:59 GMT
brian that's incredible.. i love the way all the verses have similar layouts and just.. wow
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Post by susie on Dec 20, 2005 11:52:10 GMT
and im probably better off, cause i know that you plus you is danger, only danger, only sh*t that hits the fan, and that im probably better off alone, alone, alone with me, cause you and me are far from the part where the clock strikes 12 and cinderella goes through...
thats unreal
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Post by livi on Dec 29, 2005 18:11:37 GMT
hello hello!
i'm under the weather sick of living in blue and i can't decide whether to smile at you
cold air cold lungs day and i'm supporting yellow and then i see you come my way and i can't even say hello
hello hello hello another sleepless night hello hello hello brain and your sleepless plight hello hello i am falling from a great height hello hello and with your help i won't take fright
red beacon shining it's blinding me i cannot see can you see me smiling? and all because you looked at me
hello hello hello another sleepless night hello hello hello brain and your sleepless plight hello hello i am falling from a great height hello hello and with your help i won't take fright
i'm under the weather sick of living in blue and i've decided whether i should smile at you
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Post by owensrevenge on Jan 2, 2006 21:08:10 GMT
these are random lines in a random order that i took down when i was half asleep. a nowhere near complete song, i plan on putting them in some order, maybe adding bits. the idea of the song was inspired by a short story i read. it described a place which a caracter loved. and i realised that i have no place like that. no place that if it were to burn it would take a bit of me with it. here's the untitled draft anyway. The smokes in you eyes as whats inside burns
I could take you from the burning But could i take the burning from you?
I could save you from the fire But your life'sstill in the flames
I wanna die with you But this isn't my place to die If you don't burn with this place Then you'll be living a lie
You tell me to go, leave you, and live on But i know thats not what you want You wish i could burn with you But you love me too much to let me die And i know how that feels
Stay in this place and you lose the future Leave, and spend the future lost in the past Of what will be The ashes of what was Of the only place you could call home
I could never live without you But i don't want to die I want you to live on shining But ashes don't shine
I can't see beyond the fire Nothing exists except this place and you The more the flames burn, the less there is And i don't know what to do
Times burning away And I'm sweating Not from heat My heart is screaming It's lost and confused Let it go I embrace yo
The fires come closer only carrying death We're burning for our love our sins
These are the fires of a burning heaven Your sweet haven We burn here together Your here for your home I'm here for you
Our ashes together our futures are nomore (nevermore?)
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Post by susie on Jan 2, 2006 21:09:21 GMT
i like
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